Talk:Sagramore
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Wait, what?
[edit]"According to the Lancelot-Grail Cycle, Sagramore is the son of the king of Hungary and the daughter of the Eastern Roman Emperor"
Does this mean they were two genders? 24.5.145.0 (talk) 07:21, 26 November 2009 (UTC)
What, le Desirous? French sources say le desrée, meaning the unreasonable, or one who does not play by the rules. http://fr.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sagramor — Preceding unsigned comment added by 128.214.5.234 (talk) 11:16, 10 August 2012 (UTC)
"Legend" section
[edit]The article mainly seems to suffer from poor readability, which I have attempted to improve with my recent edits.
The issue of readability seems strongly related to the section's flow and coherence, or lack thereof. Especially because of the order of how the information is being presented, which I also tried to address.
These issues would probably improve significantly if, for example, the "Legend" section focused only on the core of what lies in common to many different variations of this character's legend. But, that would likely require someone who is not a layman to the topic.
I also notice there are several themes scattered within this section; for example, "motifs" is a single theme that could easily be split into its own section with little to none as far as other alterations, but such a conclusion would benefit from the input of other editors. --Nerarth (talk) 23:19, 25 May 2026 (UTC)