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Latest comment: 15 years ago by 68.146.64.9 in topic Comes off like an ad in places

Comes off like an ad in places

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The first half of the article is fine, but the second half, with all the testimonials and quotes comes off like an ad. I considered following WP:BOLD and deleting them, but there are a few quotes from notables. But they need sourcing. When did Tony Belleci say in Mythbusters that "you guys are insane", for example? Any quotes that can't be substantiated should be deleted, I think. And rather than just having a movie ad-style list of random quotes, let's put them into context in paragraphs. 68.146.64.9 (talk) 19:59, 18 March 2011 (UTC)Reply