Talk:Ron Rivlin

Request for feedback and guidance

Hello,

I’m the author of this draft article on Ron Rivlin, which I had previously edited and gotten feedback on at User:Raf1771/sandbox. Prior to submitting this article for review, I applied the recommendations of a mentor to the draft.

I work for Revolver Gallery, the art gallery founded and directed by Ron Rivlin, and have disclosed this paid COI on my user page, as well as with the {{paid}} template on the article and on my initial sandbox draft.

The subject of the article, Ron Rivlin, has been the focus of significant third-party coverage in recent years, including features in The New York Times, The Washington Post, Newsweek, LA Magazine, and other sources which I’ve cited throughout the draft. I’ve tried to maintain a neutral, encyclopedic tone, and welcome any suggestions to improve it.

I would appreciate constructive feedback on the article’s content, tone, and sources, and would be grateful for guidance on whether and when it might be appropriate to move this draft to the mainspace.

Thank you!

Raf1771

Paid contribution disclosure

In accordance with Wikipedia’s paid editing disclosure guidelines, I disclose that I am an employee of Revolver Gallery and have contributed to this draft article about Ron Rivlin as part of my work. I aim to ensure the article is neutral, well-sourced, and follows Wikipedia’s content policies.

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