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Latest comment: 6 years ago by Xenoa

Your article has a great variety of sources and they're used well within the article. The intro is good and the career highlight does a good job showing why Roger Pen is notable. The only thing I would suggest is adding a paragraph about his personal life/background. That might not be available but more nonprofessional information on Roger would add a lot more to his page. Another edit you could make it removing the multiple in-line citations. It looks neater if there's only one citation at the end of a line. One last thing that I caught is that "NIEHS Extramural Paper of the Month" should be linked to the actual monthly paper wiki page if it has one. Xenoa (talk) 16:13, 20 April 2020 (UTC)Reply