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Latest comment: 1 year ago by ZooBlazer in topic GA Review

GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Robiatherium/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Nominator: PrimalMustelid (talk · contribs) 15:13, 8 September 2024 (UTC)Reply

Reviewer: ZooBlazer (talk · contribs) 00:52, 5 February 2025 (UTC)Reply


I should have have my comments posted soon. -- ZooBlazer 00:52, 5 February 2025 (UTC)Reply

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Just curious, could the skeletal image not be used in the infobox?

  • Add alt text to both images
  • The genus name derives from the locality of Robiac in France where some of its fossil were described plus the Greek θήρ/therium meaning "beast" or "wild animal" – Need some commas, plus change fossil to fossils, so something like this overall -->  "The genus name derives from the locality of Robiac in France, where some of its fossils were described, plus the Greek θήρ/therium, meaning "beast" or "wild animal"."
  • He said that in 1978, he then defined – Reword this so it's not he, he
  • he determined recently – What is considered recently?
  • belonged not to the Xiphodontidae but the Anoplotheriinae – Add a comma after Xiphodontidae
  • Tylopoda, along with the Amphimerycidae and Xiphodontidae split earlier – Add a comma after Xiphodontidae
  • and another work – Maybe be more specific, or at least word it differently
  • focusing most specifically on – You can just remove "most specifically"
  • Link Grande Coupure extinction event

No copyright issues detected and spotchecks came back fine. Overall, a nice article. Just a few things to clean up. -- ZooBlazer 01:21, 5 February 2025 (UTC)Reply

Implemented all suggestions, let me know if there's anything else that I need to do or missed. PrimalMustelid (talk) 01:48, 5 February 2025 (UTC)Reply
Looks good to me. Happy to promote. -- ZooBlazer 01:53, 5 February 2025 (UTC)Reply
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.