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Latest comment: 6 years ago by 2601:189:C381:5A60:BD3E:26E9:F713:EFA5 in topic That second paragraph under Career is a very hard read.

Verticals within the music industry ???

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Makes zero sense . I think that whole first paragraph should be re-written so people like myself don't have to read it 5 to 10 times to figure out what the hell is being said . It is extremely hard to understand. I even Googled " verticals music " verticals music industry " and found nothing. 2601:189:C381:5A60:BD3E:26E9:F713:EFA5 (talk) 06:08, 28 November 2019 (UTC)Reply

That second paragraph under Career is a very hard read.

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I think it's the second sentence that is a very very VERY long run-on sentence. It could be and probably SHOULD BE 3 sentences instead of one. Only would make sense the way it's written if someone was saying outloud and was talking like news reporter and putting emphasis on certain words and pausing in the right places. No normal human talks like that . Lol Really ................no normal human talks like that , and that's who reads Wikipedia mostly ...............NORMAL people. 2601:189:C381:5A60:BD3E:26E9:F713:EFA5 (talk) 06:08, 28 November 2019 (UTC)Reply