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Latest comment: 5 years ago by Some Dude From North Carolina in topic GA Review

GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Raymond Riles/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 01:50, 22 July 2021 (UTC)Reply

  • Add a serial comma between "attempted rape, burglary and robbery".
  • Add a serial comma between "moon, barked and tried to bite".
  • Add a comma after "at various points".
  • "for attempted murder of a police officer" → "for the attempted murder of a police officer"
  • Add a serial comma between "piles of papers, Bibles and other books".
  • "for Henry's murder and for Riles's" → "for Henry's murder and Riles's"
  • Archive sources (you can use this automatic tool).
  • Ping when done. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk)
Some Dude From North Carolina, thanks for the feedback. I think I have addressed the points above. I got out of the habit of archiving links a long time ago, finding it tedious and not realizing that there was an automated approach. Thanks for letting me know about that - very easy! Should the accessdates remain for archived links? Larry Hockett (Talk) 17:43, 22 July 2021 (UTC)Reply
Yes. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 17:50, 22 July 2021 (UTC)Reply