Talk:Raymond Legrand
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[edit]The style of this artcle is in short, wispy lines and the chronology of events is skewed. Details of Legrand's family life and professional career ought to be separated and put into headed sections, even though the result would be quite short. There is confusion as to when Legrand divorced Colette Rénard; was it in 1969 or 1971? Certainly he didn't divorce her twice. As Legrand was a collaborator with the Vichy regime there were usually consequences for such actions after the Second World War, but there is no mention as to what this may have meant for Legrand.Pinikadia 15:08, 28 January 2019 (UTC)
Done (the reorganization part, at least) Schazjmd (talk) 14:06, 15 July 2019 (UTC)