Talk:Ram Krishna Bantawa

Regarding How to edit my article further.

Hi,

For Draft:Ram Krishna Bantawa I have incorporated both online and offline sources for his work. The offline sources, which are from the Nepali newspapers Kantipur Post and Annapurna Post, have been added. These sources cover information about the author, including his literary works such as "Shrill Mist" and "Aamalai Chitthi," as well as his contributions to Nepali literature.

Could you suggest type of additional reliable sources and refrences for the article??

Rasilshrestha (talk) 13:55, 13 September 2024 (UTC)

Require help with external links and solving multiple issues in article.

I’ve contributed significantly to this article, and I believe there may be issues with the use of external links not fully aligning with Wikipedia’s guidelines. Could you please direct me to the relevant policies for external links, and advise on how to address this?

Additionally, I have majorly contributed to this article and would like to clarify that I do not have a close connection to the subject and have worked to ensure neutrality in my writing. As this is my first article, I kindly request other users who are familiar with the author or have read their books or listened to his songs to contribute to the article. I’ve included archives of offline sources that is in external sites of the artcle.

Thank you for your assistance. Rasilshrestha (talk) 18:31, 29 January 2025 (UTC)

Request for Feedback on my article

Hello,

I’ve been working on the article about Ram Krishna Bantawa, and I would greatly appreciate it if you could take some time to review it and provide feedback. My goal is to ensure that the article meets Wikipedia’s guidelines, particularly in terms of neutrality, reliability of sources, and overall quality.

I would like to clarify that I do not personally know the author, and the claim that "a major contributor to this article has a close connection with the subject" is likely due to my use of offline sources, which I’ve cited in the external links section. Given this, I’m especially keen to get input from a broader range of editors to ensure that the article is presented in the most neutral and balanced way possible.

If you could help by evaluating the following aspects, I would greatly appreciate it:

1. Neutral Point of View: Does the article have any areas where the tone might be perceived as overly positive or negative? How can I adjust these sections to better reflect neutrality?
2. Clarity and Further Information: Are there any areas in the article that need further clarification ?
3. Content Suggestion: Are there any significant aspects that should be included? I’ve focused primarily on his books and songs, as I do not have reliable sources for his awards. I prefer not to include this information at the moment, though I do have pictures of him receiving awards and being called up on stage. However, I chose to focus on his contributions through literature and song instead.

Your feedback will be incredibly helpful in refining the article and making it more accurate and balanced. Thank you for your time and assistance! Rasilshrestha (talk) 17:46, 4 February 2025 (UTC)

No editor would bother reading a query generated using ChatGPT/AI. Jeraxmoira🐉 (talk) 18:06, 4 February 2025 (UTC)

Hello,

I apologize i was confused on how do i write my query. I just wanted some help on improving my article . As i have contributed majorly to the article and it is my first article but i donot have close connection to the subject. I believe it was due to the reason that i had news photograph of the subject. Nevertheless i wanted feedback if the article has neutral point of view and if there are some areas i have to improve on.

Thank You Rasilshrestha (talk) 03:19, 8 February 2025 (UTC)