Talk:Priscilla Duffield
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Latest comment: 11 years ago by Ian Rose in topic GA Review
| Priscilla Duffield has been listed as one of the Warfare good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it. Review: November 2, 2014. (Reviewed version). |
A fact from Priscilla Duffield appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 27 October 2014. The text of the entry was as follows:
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Reviewer: Ian Rose (talk · contribs) 12:19, 22 October 2014 (UTC)
Will aim to get this in the next few days... Cheers, Ian Rose (talk) 12:19, 22 October 2014 (UTC)
- Toolbox check
- Dab/EL checker not working.
- Checked duplinks via another tool and removed one.
- Prose/detail
- Just a little copyediting, hope no issues.
- Short and sharp but I think enough there for GA.
- Structure
- The lead certainly does its job of establishing what made her noteworthy but I think it might be a bit short for GA -- perhaps a couple more sentences to flesh out her life details, e.g. "Born Priscilla Browne in California...", then noting her marriage / change of name and perhaps that she spent her later years in Colorado?
- Images
- Licence checks out.
- Referencing
- Fully cited to what look like reliable sources.
- Formatting seems okay but providing OCLCs for two books looks inconsistent -- suggest none (my personal preference) or all of them.
Pretty well there... Cheers, Ian Rose (talk) 05:14, 25 October 2014 (UTC)
- Thanks. Have expanded the introduction. The idea was to show that the Manhattan Project people were not all physicists. I also gathered material on Anne Wilson Marks, but don't have an image, or quite as much information. Hawkeye7 (talk) 00:13, 2 November 2014 (UTC)
- I think it's a great idea to bring more of the project's members to the fore -- well done, passing as GA. Cheers, Ian Rose (talk) 04:56, 2 November 2014 (UTC)
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