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Latest comment: 6 years ago by Hog Farm in topic GA Review

GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Ooedigera/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 23:09, 14 March 2020 (UTC)Reply

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Lead - "Northern Greenland" - I don't believe northern should be capitalized in this case.

Infobox - The order doesn't seem to be cited anywhere.

It's classified in the family Vetulicolidae, therefore it has to be classified in the order Vetulicolida   User:Dunkleosteus77 |push to talk  19:19, 15 March 2020 (UTC)Reply

Taxonomy Some MOS:SEAOFBLUE stuff, but I don't think it's avoidable in this case.

"(the others undescribed from ..." - What does this signify?

fixed   User:Dunkleosteus77 |push to talk  19:19, 15 March 2020 (UTC)Reply

Palaeocology - Is there a reason the Cambrian Explosion navbox is in this section? The Cambrian isn't mentioned at all in the section.

It describes the Cambrian environment   User:Dunkleosteus77 |push to talk  19:19, 15 March 2020 (UTC)Reply

Is there a wikilink for nektobenthic like there is for nektonic?

nope   User:Dunkleosteus77 |push to talk  19:19, 15 March 2020 (UTC)Reply

"It is possible vetulicolians did both" - Is both filter feeding and deposit feeding?

yeah, clarified   User:Dunkleosteus77 |push to talk  19:19, 15 March 2020 (UTC)Reply

Duplicate links of filter feeding and filter feeders in this section, they both go to the same article.

fixed   User:Dunkleosteus77 |push to talk  19:19, 15 March 2020 (UTC)Reply

The lead states that Ooedigera lived in an oxygen minimum zone, but the last section indicates that it may have been one. Unless I'm misunderstanding something, the lead should reflect the uncertainty.

done   User:Dunkleosteus77 |push to talk  19:19, 15 March 2020 (UTC)Reply

References and images are good, placing on hold. {u|Dunkleosteus77}}. Hog Farm (talk) 18:59, 15 March 2020 (UTC)Reply

@Dunkleosteus77: - All concerns, including the northern Greenland one, addressed. Passing for GA now. Hog Farm (talk) 22:30, 15 March 2020 (UTC)Reply