Talk:One Mic
Add topicLatest comment: 15 years ago by Toussaint in topic Music video section
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[edit]The first paragraph sounds completely strange. "Nas goes on a tangent about how he is metaphorically Jesus"? That's not informative about (nor indicative of) One Mic at all.
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[edit]Good work gone into this article. It's close to a B-class. Two things stand out as wanting improvement. Firstly the lead does not summarise the article, see WP:LEAD. The other thing is while references here seem good there is currently no source for the track listing. Regards, SunCreator (talk) 02:37, 12 May 2010 (UTC)
Music video section
[edit]I'm restoring the music video section that I wrote because I cited a credible source and derived the synopsis from viewing the video. --Toussaint (talk) 10:14, 27 March 2011 (UTC)