Talk:One57/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 23:30, 1 July 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 23:30, 1 July 2021 (UTC)

Comments

• Short description goes at the top.
• Add alt text to every image being used.
• "roof height at 1,004 feet" → "roof height of 1,004 feet"
• Add a comma after "shape, of the building".
• "leaf walls, white-oak" → "leaf walls, a white-oak"
• "an arts and crafts space" → "arts and crafts space"
• "wash room" should be written as one word.
• Remove the comma after "following August".
• "The plans called a" → "The plans called for a"
• Add a serial comma after "Abu Dhabi International Bank".
• Add a hyphen between "class action".
• "work site" should be one word.
• "measuring measuring" - remove the double word.
• Add "the" before "parent company".
• "attracted from" - shouldn't this be "attracted to"?
• Add a comma before Michael Dell.
• "in spite of" → "despite" (less wordy)
• "president Elizabeth Goldstein" → "President Elizabeth Goldstein"
• Wikilink Christopher Gray and Michael Kimmelman.
• USA TODAY → USA Today
• Wall Street Journal → The Wall Street Journal
• Sort categories in alphabetical order.

Progress

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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@Some Dude From North Carolina: Thanks. I have fixed all of these now. Epicgenius (talk) 01:27, 8 July 2021 (UTC)

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