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Latest comment: 16 years ago by Andy F in topic Rewrite

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The football section looks more detailed than it needs to be.----Felix Folio Secundus (talk) 06:52, 24 May 2009 (UTC)Reply

I strongly agree so I have boldly removed the essay on North Petherwin Football Club and started a new page. The material was inappropriate to this article about the parish. I have also removed the anecdotal 'travelogue' essay about the countryside. Andy F (talk) 10:26, 1 May 2010 (UTC)Reply

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Further to the above, I've now substantially re-written the article. This has meant deleting most of the original unsourced unreferenced text. Much of the original was anecdotal, non-encyclopedic or original research WP:NOR. The otter sanctuary section was effectively advertising WP:ADS. Hence a lot of trimming was required. Andy F (talk) 11:29, 1 May 2010 (UTC)Reply