Talk:Norbert Hayes

GA review

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Nominator: BeanieFan11 (talk · contribs) 20:23, 15 August 2025 (UTC)

Reviewer: Gonzo fan2007 (talk · contribs) 15:13, 18 August 2025 (UTC)

I will review this. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 15:13, 18 August 2025 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable, as shown by a source spot-check. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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Comments

• I would unpipe Brown County, Wisconsin, since you haven't introduced "Wisconsin" yet in the lead.
• moved to Green Bay, for his senior year of high school comma isn't needed
• Is Army of Occupation (Germany) the correct target? This redirects to British Army of the Rhine, which doesn't seem to have included any US personnel in WWI?
  • I don't know. I delinked it, let me know if I should remove it.
• as the team joined the National Football League (NFL). you can just link "NFL" and not spell it out again in the body of the article
• In July 1923, Hayes was released by the Legion to allow him to sign with the Green Bay Packers on request; he signed with the Packers in September.
• References:
  • All appear reliable for what is being cited
  • All are formatted consistently
  • Spot checks: 2, 5, 11, 12, 16, 21
    • Ref 12 calls him "Bud", maybe worth mentioning that his nickname had some differentiation

Nice work! « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 17:41, 18 August 2025 (UTC)

• @Gonzo fan2007: I think I addressed everything. BeanieFan11 (talk) 20:07, 18 August 2025 (UTC)
  • Passed. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 20:27, 18 August 2025 (UTC)

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Did you know nomination

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. You can locate your hook here.No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by TarnishedPath talk 11:37, 23 September 2025 (UTC)

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• ... that NFL player Norbert Hayes was known as "Butts"?

• Source: e.g. this

• • Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/HS Tübingen
  • Comment: To do QPQ within a day or two.

5x expanded by BeanieFan11 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 408 past nominations.

BeanieFan11 (talk) 23:21, 22 August 2025 (UTC).

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Adequate sourcing: Neutral: Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:

Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Cited: Interesting:

QPQ: Done.

Overall: Nominated within 7 days of GA and long enough. Passes Earwig. Article is sufficiently sourced. Hook is interesting and is verified by the source. Nomination is good to go. PizzaKing13 (¡Hablame!) 🍕👑 01:10, 26 August 2025 (UTC)