Talk:Noah Cates

GA review

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Nominator: GhostRiver (talk · contribs) 21:01, 9 January 2025 (UTC)

Reviewer: LastJabberwocky (talk · contribs) 12:40, 11 October 2025 (UTC)

Hi, happy to pick up your review! I have mostly prose suggestions. —LastJabberwocky (Rrarr) 12:40, 11 October 2025 (UTC)

@GhostRiver: Pinging you! Maybe we can work on the article on the weekends. —LastJabberwocky (Rrarr) 08:33, 17 October 2025 (UTC)

@LastJabberwocky: All comments addressed. — GhostRiver 20:58, 20 October 2025 (UTC)

Thank you for waiting this long for my brief review :)! I have no further suggestions, promoting —LastJabberwocky (Rrarr) 21:28, 20 October 2025 (UTC)

Copyright and images

• all green Y
• It would be nice get at least one photo of Cates, but my only way of searching for Common License is through Flickr, which doesn't seem to have any
  • We'll probably have to wait until the next time the Flyers are in Seattle.
• According to this and this Cates still with the Flyers for 2025−2026 season
  • I'm not sure what the suggestion is here. The lede says that he is a Flyer, and it's WP policy not to add stats until the season is complete.
    • Fair enough, didn't know this policy :)! —LastJabberwocky (Rrarr) 21:28, 20 October 2025 (UTC)
• I'm not sure about the right approach to "Awards and honors" table. Currently it's alphabetized by award names. Does it make more sense to sort it chronologically?
  • There is no consensus as far as I can tell. I prefer alphabetically as some players receive the same honor multiple seasons.

Prose

• goal to send his team to the state tournament ----> goal that sent his team to the state tournament Reason: Simplification
  •  Done
• immediately after high school in 2017 ----> immediately after his 2017 high school graduation
  •  Done
• He scored his first goal the next day, combining with his brother for three of Duluth's four goals in their 7–4 loss to Minnesota. ---> He scored his first goal the next day, combined with his brother's goal into three of Duluth's four goals in their 7–4 loss to Minnesota.
  • dropped the part about his brother altogether
• the trio combining for 10 goals and 18 points in their first 18 games of the calendar year ---> the trio contributed 10 goals and 18 points in their first 18 games of the calendar year
  •  Done
• Cates's first multi-goal game came on March 1, when he scored twice ----> Cates's first multi-goal game came on March 1, where he scored twice
  •  Done

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