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Latest comment: 3 years ago by Escape Orbit in topic Problems in lead


From Northern Ireland?

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Is it accurate to put her in the 'from Northern Ireland' categories? She only lived there for a few months and does not appear to hold citizenship there. Wouldn't it be more accurate to say she's from India or the UK? Eshna99 (talk) 02:10, 9 July 2020 (UTC)Reply

Problems in lead

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Just a few problems in the lead I've addressed.

  • Content in the lead that is not mentioned, never mind cited, in the article body does need to be cited. Where is the information that she is "based in the south England" coming from ?
  • Either she is one of the most popular poets on Instagram, or she isn't. We don't need to weaselly describe her as such. Particularly when the source says she "popular", not successful, and that she doesn't wish to be an "Instapoet".
  • The "one of the most exciting young writers working today" quote is just by someone publicising her appearance at an event, so hardly the most authoritative or neutral of opinions. This is just peacocking rather than anything usefully factual.

--Escape Orbit (Talk) 16:00, 4 October 2022 (UTC)Reply