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Latest comment: 1 year ago by Caleb Stanford in topic Comments left by AfC reviewers

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This page is not unambiguously promotional, because I am the founder of NexDock, and is not outright forbidden for a company founder to create or edit an article about their own company on Wikipedia. While I have a personal connection to the subject, I have made every effort to adhere to Wikipedia’s guidelines on neutrality and verifiability. My goal is to contribute factual, well-sourced, and encyclopedic content that adds value to the platform. If there are specific concerns about my edits, I welcome feedback and suggestions to ensure compliance with Wikipedia’s standards. I also created the articles on Lapdock and Windows Continuum because I have expertise in these topics. I believe they are relevant to the broader context of technological innovation and provide valuable historical and technical information. While I have made every effort to write these articles with a neutral point of view and cite reliable sources, I welcome input from other editors to improve them further.--Emrekosmaz (talk) 06:43, 27 December 2024 (UTC)Reply

@Emrekosmaz: your draft has been spared speedy deletion, and moved into the draft space instead. You have a conflict of interest (specifically, of the paid-editing kind) in this subject, and should not have attempted to publish this article directly yourself. You may work on the draft in the draft space, but must submit it for pre-publication review through the AfC process instead. I have added a template for you to do that; you can click on the blue 'submit' button when you are ready. Please make your paid-editing disclosure first, though. Thank you. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 07:25, 27 December 2024 (UTC)Reply
I've taken the above as the disclosure and filled out the form for them. Espresso Addict (talk) 07:27, 27 December 2024 (UTC)Reply
I’m really sorry—I didn’t realize that being founder meant I needed to disclose under the paid-editing rules. I already added a disclosure to my user page Emrekosmaz (talk) 07:31, 27 December 2024 (UTC)Reply

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  • Comment: The article looks close-ish to reasonable shape, but I believe a few places still need clean up (and ideally, attention from a non conflicted editor).
    * "These products function as laptop shells, offering a display, keyboard, trackpad, and an integrated battery, while relying on external smartphones, tablets, or single-board computers for processing power and software. By integrating with mobile operating systems and desktop modes, NexDock devices are intended for users who prefer a modular approach to computing, utilizing a single core device across multiple form factors. " in the lead is WP:PROMO. This is mostly about lapdocks in general, not NexDock.
    * The following sentence: "However, as mobile processors and desktop operating modes advance, the NexDock concept has remained an option for flexible and cost-effective computing solutions." is WP:PROMO. This and the previous sentence are not cited.
    * "By connecting to smartphones, mini PCs, or HDMI sticks, it provided a desktop-like interface on a larger screen" Isn't this just restating the definition of a lapdock again? What is it adding?
    * "Analysts commended its adaptability and suitability for users who frequently transition between different viewing and input modes" Shouldn't this fit better in reception?
    * "As they contain no on-board CPU or storage, they rely entirely on the connected host device for processing power." Isn't this, once again, just repeating the definition of a lapdock? What is new and notable about Nexdock in particular?
    * "It continued NexDock’s focus on modular and sustainable computing" More promo. Was this written by chatGPT?
    Please fix and clean up the article and try again. Thanks, Caleb Stanford (talk) 06:54, 10 March 2025 (UTC)Reply