Talk:Nesting instinct
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Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment
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This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 5 September 2018 and 28 November 2018. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Mfk757. Peer reviewers: Asp482.
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The citations for this entire article are amazingly weak
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Here's a list of the sources cited:
- a b c Nesting Instinct by Pregnancy Weekly
- Nesting Instinct in Pregnancy, womenshealthcaretopics.com
- A Need to Nest, By Deborah Skolnik, parents.com
- Nesting, pregnancy-info.net
- 10 Things That Might Surprise You About Being Pregnant, kidshealth.org
- Nesting Instinct - WikiParenting
Note that having websites sited is weak only because we must presuppose that the articles and authors involved are not professionally moderated.
Further, citing a Wiki????Tgm1024 (talk) 16:22, 22 January 2010 (UTC)
Link added
[edit]Link added to Broodiness--Cacucho (talk) 01:31, 27 September 2012 (UTC)
Awful
[edit]The "In humans" section reads like it was written by a high school student. How does garbage like this wind up on here? — Preceding unsigned comment added by 68.132.42.130 (talk) 04:08, 19 March 2016 (UTC)
Peer Review
[edit]Hey!
I noticed a few things: let's begin with the introductory paragraph. It's very short. It could definitely use more detail to capture the readers attention, make sure there's enough information in this section to give the reader an idea of what the article is about. Also, there isn't much detail on why the newborns need this nesting instinct. What it provides for the offspring, how it changes the parents (hormonal or physical), and how males react to their pregnant partner are some ideas to expand on.
The number of examples are good (animals, insects, etc) they just need some more information in each, which I'm sure you already know.
Cheers! Asp482 (talk) 18:29, 7 November 2018 (UTC)