Talk:Neon Hunk
Add topicLatest comment: 1 year ago by Beachweak in topic Cleanup needed
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Cleanup needed
[edit]Following an AfD discussion that resulted in no consensus, I've came to the conclusion this needs severe cleanup. I still think it fails WP:GNG but that's just my own opinion. Below is a list of things I think need done to this article to get it into shape:
- More citations is the most pressing issue. The article still only has one source and desperately needs more to support the rest of the claims, especially about the duo.
- There should be some modifications to put it in line with the WP:MOS; sections, an infobox and better formatting come to mind but there's a TON of other things to do.
- The tone and wording of sections needs to be heavily cleaned up; "noise/freak weirdos" in reference to other noise artists is probably the most egregious point that comes to mind.
- While I think it will be hard to find more sources considering the AfD discussion resulted in a few articles only talking about the album and not the duo, I think the article should be extended if the prior issues are addressed. The article itself ends with speculation that should be removed (WP:CRYSTAL) ("and as of 2009 is working on a full-length album and recording music for various film and video related media").
If the article can get all of these changes done and done well my mind will be changed about the topic of deletion. Beachweak (talk) 10:13, 26 November 2024 (UTC)
- I've provided some more formatting and a bit of copywriting, but work still needs to be done. Hopefully some other editors will pick this up. Beachweak (talk) 11:59, 26 November 2024 (UTC)