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Nominator: Praseodymium-141 (talk · contribs) 16:09, 24 September 2026 (UTC)
Reviewer: ChopinChemist (talk · contribs) 03:54, 29 September 2026 (UTC)
I'll be reviewing this article, and will be basing my evaluation on previous GARs (1 and 2) and adding additional comments.ChopinChemistTalk? 03:54, 29 September 2026 (UTC)
- Thanks for taking up the review! 141Pr -\contribs/- 15:53, 29 September 2026 (UTC)
Well-written
[edit]- a. prose
Thin films 45 nm thick have been reported to order ferromagnetically below approximately 19 K
This could be better worded to "Thin NdO films 45 nm thick show ferromagnetic properties at approximately 19K"
Done - I've changed the sentence to "Thin NdO films 45 nm thick have been reported to become ferromagnetic below about 19 K." 141Pr -\contribs/- 20:02, 30 September 2026 (UTC)
- b. MoS compliance in
- b.1. lead section
- b.2. layout:
- b.3. words to watch:
Verifiable with no original research
[edit]Physical properties
[edit]It melts at approximately 1,024 °C (1,875 °F) and boils at 3,074 °C (5,565 °F).[11]
Source [11] is dead, could replace with this url but I don't recommend due to the conversion error (melting point 10218.5 °C!). I suggest replacing with CRC Handbook or Arblaster in the infobox for the melting point. Furthermore, if source [11] is replaced by the url above, other issues persist:
On heating at atmospheric pressure, this structure transforms into a body-centered cubic phase at about 863 °C (1,585 °F).[15][11]
The Los Alamos National Laboratory URL would not support this claim but citation [15] does.The metal tarnishes in air. Its surface oxide can flake away, exposing fresh metal and allowing oxidation to continue.[11]
and this sectionNeodymium is a constituent of mischmetal, a mixture of rare-earth metals whose traditional composition contains about 18% neodymium.[11]... Neodymium salts are used to color enamels.[11]
The Los Alamos National Laboratory URL above would not support these claims.Although the element had been identified in its compounds, neodymium metal was not isolated in relatively pure form until 1925.[11]
Haynes 2016 would be a better source for this claim
- TLDR: The Los Alamos URL should be replaced.
Uses
[edit]Neodymium-doped glass slabs used in high-energy laser systems for inertial confinement fusion research.
This detail should be cited given its inclusion in the lead.
Chemical properties
[edit]- The source Webelements.com [22] should be removed as the link is no longer active. I will find sources then suggest a replacement later, but you could look at Advanced Inorganic Chemistry by Dr. Cotton and Dr. Wilkinson
Done - I’ve replaced the WebElements citations with other citations including Cotton et al. and Ganjali et al. 141Pr -\contribs/- 18:37, 29 September 2026 (UTC)
Permanent magnets
[edit]- Ref 82-84 in
Other audio applications include headphones[82] and magnetic pickups for guitars and bass guitars.[83][84]
should be replaced with more reliable sources per WP:VENDOR. A suggested source to replace 82 is Bünzli & Mcgill 2018, p. 43 in Ullmann's encyclopedia:
- Bünzli, Jean‐Claude G.; Mcgill, Ian (2018). "Rare Earth Elements". Ullmann's Encyclopedia of Industrial Chemistry. Weinheim: Wiley-VCH. doi:10.1002/14356007.a22_607.pub2. ISBN 978-3-527-30673-2.
Done - I’ve replaced the vendor references with independent sources. The headphone claim now cites Bünzli & McGill, and I changed the guitar-pickup wording to match an IEEE source; I have removed the bass-guitar example as I couldn't find an independent and reliable ref for it. 141Pr -\contribs/- 18:05, 29 September 2026 (UTC)
Source spot check
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[26] This source doesn't provide a strong support for the claim Some neodymium compounds change their apparent color under different types of illumination
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Broad in its coverage
[edit]Neutral
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