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Latest comment: 7 years ago by Nstrathman in topic [Untitled]

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Jalvar042 (talk) 23:02, 15 May 2019 (UTC)== Peer Review ==Reply

I think the wikipedia article has a very clear and concise introduction explaining who Neide Dias de Sá is. It is neutral and shows no bias in the writing. The wording does not directly steal quotes from bibliography texts. Must check the 5th citation under Artwork, however, I was not able to access it on google books and the time stamp that was placed might be affecting the date= symbol showing on the work cited section. Maybe separate what exhibitions were solo and group more clearly. More citations under artwork should be added. There are very minor changes needed for this draft. I thought it was a good introduction to Neide's art career.Jalvar042 (talk) 23:08, 15 May 2019 (UTC)Reply

You need a LOT more content and sources. This article is way too short.Nstrathman (talk) 06:08, 28 May 2019 (UTC)Reply