Talk:Negussie Roba/GA1

GA Review

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Nominator: BeanieFan11 (talk · contribs) 02:07, 26 September 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: WikiOriginal-9 (talk · contribs) 19:42, 26 September 2024 (UTC)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Will review soon. ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 19:42, 26 September 2024 (UTC)

• Added college alumni cat.
• Added Ethiopian athletics coaches cat.
• "Negussie was an athlete and was both a sprinter and football player" Is "was an athlete" needed?
  • Removed.
• "being among the first 12 Ethiopian Olympians" What's that mean? Was 1956 the first Olympics with Ethiopians?
  • Changed; 1956 was Ethiopia's first year at the Olympics.
• "last in his heat" Is there a link for that?
  • Hmmm... I can't find one – thoughts?
• Does it say who gifted him an automobile?
  • All the source says is "The current (1998) marathon record was made by Belayneh Dinsamo, a trainee of Coach Negussie. This long-standing record had earned Coach Negussie a prize of an automobile."

I think that's all. ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 03:25, 30 September 2024 (UTC)

• @WikiOriginal-9: Responded. BeanieFan11 (talk) 14:44, 30 September 2024 (UTC)
  • • I don't see anything for heat either. Hopefully someone creates Glossary of track and field terms. That's all. Nice work! ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 14:58, 30 September 2024 (UTC)

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