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Latest comment: 2 years ago by Leoniceno in topic Adding Template:Advert

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I added Template:AD to this article. The problem is pervasive, but a few specific examples of promotional language and puffery:

"When adults model active singing and movement behaviors, the child imitates and learns. The combination of classroom activities and at-home music-making inspired by a recording and songbook help children learn music skills naturally and effortlessly."

"The recordings are professionally produced and richly orchestrated..." "When adults model active singing and movement behaviors, the child imitates and learns. The combination of classroom activities and at-home music-making inspired by a recording and songbook help children learn music skills naturally and effortlessly."

"...the program provides a fun, relaxed environment with a nonformal teaching approach."

I haven't looked at the two references provided in the article, but based on their titles, they appear to be general, and don't specifically address Music Together. Actually I'm not sure if they even support notability. I think Music Together probably IS notable, based on some cursory Googling, but the article needs to be rewritten.

Leoniceno (talk) 18:52, 14 September 2023 (UTC)Reply