Talk:Mostafa Nissaboury

Comments from Elementarystores

I've moved the following text from the article body to here, below text is from @Elementarystores

The draft of the Wikipedia article on Mostafa Nissaboury has several issues that need to be addressed:

Lack of Citations: Many statements in the article are not supported by reliable sources. Wikipedia requires verifiable citations for claims, especially in biographies of living persons. For example, details about his early life, contributions, and the 2016 interview need proper references. Citations should be included for information about Anfas/Souffles, the "Poésie Toute" manifesto, and any other claims about his influence on Moroccan literature.

Promotional Language: The article contains language that may be seen as promotional, such as phrases like "greatly contributed to the renewal of Moroccan poetry" or "significant milestone." Wikipedia prefers neutral and objective descriptions. Instead of making subjective claims, provide factual statements supported by references.

Phrases like "marked a significant shift" and "leading voice for avant-garde literature" need to be substantiated with references or rephrased to be more neutral.

Structure Issues: The article needs better organization, with clearly defined sections for Early Life, Career, Contributions, and Legacy. This would improve readability and ensure the information is presented coherently. There are miscellaneous text segments from unrelated topics at the beginning and end of the draft (like a list of Moroccan literary figures and a note about multiple issues). These should be removed or properly integrated into the structure of the article if relevant.

Outdated Template Messages: Template messages about improving the article should be resolved rather than left in the body of the draft. If this is intended for Wikipedia, these issues should be addressed before publishing.

Incoherent Text at the Bottom: The text toward the end appears to be unrelated to the rest of the draft, listing various topics and links that seem out of context. If this content is part of a template, it should be formatted correctly, or else it should be removed.

Summary: The article draft requires more citations for verification, a more neutral tone, better organization, and removal of unrelated or incoherent content. Addressing these issues will help ensure it meets Wikipedia's standards for biographies.

JeffUK 11:42, 25 October 2024 (UTC)

@Elementarystone I've put this text here as I didn't want it to get lost. But I will say, you are very welcome to modify the article yourself to resolve some of these issues, be Bold!

JeffUK 11:43, 25 October 2024 (UTC)