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Latest comment: 4 years ago by HickoryOughtShirt?4 in topic GA Review

GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Morgan Frost/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk · contribs) 15:04, 6 November 2021 (UTC)Reply

I'll review this later. HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 15:04, 6 November 2021 (UTC)Reply

Review

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Are acronyms (OHL, AHL) needed in the lead if they are never used again? They are explained in the body anyways.
RemovedGhostRiver 17:57, 6 November 2021 (UTC)Reply
Fix the dash on 2018-19 OHL season WL so it bypasses the redirect
FixedGhostRiver 17:57, 6 November 2021 (UTC)Reply
Fix WL on hat trick to bypass redirect
FixedGhostRiver 17:57, 6 November 2021 (UTC)Reply
Recommend changing All-Star in Awards and honours to All-Star Game or All-Star Classic
AddedGhostRiver 17:57, 6 November 2021 (UTC)Reply

HickoryOughtShirt?4 I have also changed the lede to reflect that (for the time being, at least) he's a prospect in the Phantoms and not a full-fledged Flyer. Really thought he'd make the team out of camp, but... — GhostRiver 17:57, 6 November 2021 (UTC)Reply

Continued review

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