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Latest comment: 19 years ago by CatherineMunro in topic Lead section

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I'm sorry you didn't like the changes I made to the intro, Jwinius -- I stumbled across the page via "Random article" and was trying to bring it a little more inline with Wikipedia:Lead section and Wikipedia:Guide_to_writing_better_articles#Lead_section, especially since there are many applications (our internal WP:POPUPS, the external apps Trillian and Qwiki, etc) that use the first paragraph of our articles as a definition or gloss on a subject. I'd never seen another article begin with non-sentence list of common names like that, and I don't see an advantage to that style -- could you explain why you'd like to keep it? At the very least, it ought to be Montatheris and synonyms, and not the words "Common names" that are bolded. Thanks! Catherine\talk 03:18, 28 August 2006 (UTC)Reply

Hi, Catherine. I'm sorry if I don't seem appreciative of your efforts, but I created this style (applied throughout Category:True vipers) out of frustration with the status quo. I've tried to explain myself here: User:Jwinius/Style. Please let me know what you think. --Jwinius 11:59, 28 August 2006 (UTC)Reply
Thanks for taking the time to explain. I have to say I disagree with you -- I have always found the multiple bolded names to work just fine in the introduction (your Example 0a), and as I said above there are external reasons not to have a list in the first lines of the lead section, but I don't feel strongly enough about it to try to convince you to change your mind. This is something for you to work out with the other editors at Wikipedia:WikiProject Tree of Life -- if your way prevails as a style guideline, I'll be just as happy to start editing to conform to that instead. Best wishes to you! Catherine\talk 16:25, 28 August 2006 (UTC)Reply