Talk:Mitchell Cole
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Personal life
[edit]Edited a line then went something like, he is not related to JC but has children with his sister. I am not sure that saying that somebody is not related to somebody is necessary, just say that he has children with his sister. 213.213.136.113 - 14:37, 27 June 2009
- Needs sourcing(citation), otherwise it's prone to being removed. Govvy (talk) 23:22, 27 June 2009 (UTC)
Mitchell was a good friend of mine at school and I can confirm that he was certainly not related to Joe Cole (footballer). I suspect that the reason this was mentioned was because both Mitchell and Charly (Mitchell's wife) shared the exact same surname. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 194.176.105.144 (talk) 12:49, 18 March 2013 (UTC)
Death
[edit]Various reports on Twitter that Cole died last night. Any reliable sources? Longwayround (talk) 11:03, 1 December 2012 (UTC)
Incorrect Date of Death
[edit]I'm Mitchell's auntie and, incorrectly, people believe Mitch died on the 1 December 2012, when in fact he actually died on 30 November 2012. I do not wish to create my own account to make this amendment. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 5.159.122.118 (talk) 14:44, 5 December 2016 (UTC)
GA review
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Nominator: SBFCEdit (talk · contribs) 10:25, 19 August 2025 (UTC)
Reviewer: Morogris (talk · contribs) 15:00, 7 June 2026 (UTC)
Body paragraph, infobox, lead
[edit]Will review this article in the upcoming days. It will consist of reviewing the body paragraphs, lead, and infobox to make sure everything is up to quality. Then I will look at the sources for proper attribution. Stay put! Morogris (✉ • ✎) 15:00, 7 June 2026 (UTC)
Placing article on hold for 7 days. See review below. Morogris (✉ • ✎) 19:09, 7 June 2026 (UTC)
- All my concerns have been addressed. Moving this to pass. Morogris (✉ • ✎) 19:43, 14 June 2026 (UTC)
Early life
[edit]Born in London, Cole attended Moorfield Primary School.[2] - Include full location (i.e. London, England) as you did in the infobox, and their DOB here as well. If the school is notable, consider redlinking.
- ✓ Done. SBFCEdit (talk) 18:51, 14 June 2026 (UTC)
Club career
[edit]He went onto the pitch at Upton Park to sign his first professional contract with West Ham - Do we have a date for his debut? It would be good to add it here if we do. It also sounds weird that he went onto the pitch to sign. I think we can rephrase "after signing his first professional contract with West Ham".
- ✓ Done – rephrased for clarity. Cole did not make a senior appearance for West Ham, so there is no debut date to add. The source states that the signing itself took place on the pitch at Upton Park as part of a ceremonial event for youth players signing their first professional contracts. SBFCEdit (talk) 18:51, 14 June 2026 (UTC)
Shortly thereafter, he collapsed three times and was diagnosed with the genetic heart condition hypertrophic cardiomyopathy. - That's terrible... do we know how long was the "shortly thereafter"? Across several games or in the same match? Specify if available.
- ✓ Unfortunately, the source does not specify the timeframe between signing his contract and the collapses. SBFCEdit (talk) 18:51, 14 June 2026 (UTC)
Cole also started in the 2005 FA Trophy final on 23 May 2005, in which Grays defeated Hucknall Town on penalties - I saw the final article and it seems like they tied 1-1 in regular time and then won 6–5 in penalties. I advise you add this too with a supporting ref.
- ✓ Done. Added the regular time score. The existing source already supports this. SBFCEdit (talk) 18:51, 14 June 2026 (UTC)
Southend was similar to that of former manager Mark Stimson - Given Mark Stimson is fully spelled out before, his last name should be fine
- ✓ Done. SBFCEdit (talk) 18:51, 14 June 2026 (UTC)
and scored his first goal for the club in a 1–0 away victory over Millwall on 24 September 2006 - Just curious, but in other instances you included the location for each of the names (i.e. "at the The Den", assuming the ref supports it). I would advise you do the same to keep the structure you've been using earlier which is great.
- ✓ Done. SBFCEdit (talk) 18:51, 14 June 2026 (UTC)
reuniting with former Grays manager Mark Stimson - Same here, you can remove "Mark".
- ✓ Done. SBFCEdit (talk) 18:51, 14 June 2026 (UTC)
4–4 away draw against Forest Green Rovers on 9 April 2007 - Similar to the suggestion above, you can include the stadium for consistency.
- ✓ Done. SBFCEdit (talk) 18:51, 14 June 2026 (UTC)
away win at Salisbury City on 24 January 2009 - Ditto here, and I would suggest against Salisbury City instead of at.
- ✓ Done. SBFCEdit (talk) 18:51, 14 June 2026 (UTC)
over Kidderminster Harriers on 5 December 2009 - Ditto here on stadium link unless it was a home game which we know already what it is.
- ✓ Done. SBFCEdit (talk) 18:51, 14 June 2026 (UTC)
6–0 victory at Eastbourne Borough on 2 March 2010 - Ditto here if it was an away game, and I would suggest against instead of at.
- ✓ Done. SBFCEdit (talk) 18:51, 14 June 2026 (UTC)
3–2 defeat to Macclesfield Town on 16 October 2010 - Ditto here if it was an away game
- ✓ Done. SBFCEdit (talk) 18:51, 14 June 2026 (UTC)
Ahead of the 2011–12 season, Cole appeared in a number of pre-season friendlies for Stotfold of the Spartan South Midlands League and played in the club's opening match of the season, a 2–0 home win over Oxhey Jets on 13 August 2011 - If they have a stadium mentioned in the ref, I would suggest you link it as it would be the first mention.
- ✓ Done. SBFCEdit (talk) 18:51, 14 June 2026 (UTC)
Cole scored his first goal for Hitchin in a 3–1 away victory over Bedford Town on 29 August 2011, and left the club on 17 November 2011 after 15 appearances and one goal - Ditto here on linking away stadium if supported by ref.
- ✓ Done. SBFCEdit (talk) 18:51, 14 June 2026 (UTC)
Cole then signed for Southern League Division One Central club Biggleswade Town, making his debut on 19 November 2011 as a substitute in a 1–1 home draw with Slough Town. - If they have a stadium mentioned in the ref, I would suggest you link it as it would be the first mention.
- ✓ Done. SBFCEdit (talk) 18:51, 14 June 2026 (UTC)
Cole subsequently appeared for Essex Senior League club Basildon United in a 1–0 away victory at Barkingside on 22 September 2012 - Against instead of at, and link the away stadium if applicable.
- ✓ Done. SBFCEdit (talk) 18:51, 14 June 2026 (UTC)
"Retirement" section - The section is called retirement, but in reality he simply announced interest for it and later came back to play for a bit. I think we should rename it to "Retirement announcement" or "Temporary retirement" and then find a way to actually close it out by confirming when was his last game in the later sections.
- ✓ Done – renamed the section to "Retirement from professional football". While Cole subsequently returned to play at semi-professional level, the retirement referred specifically to his departure from professional football. SBFCEdit (talk) 18:51, 14 June 2026 (UTC)
International career
[edit]for a friendly against the Netherlands - Can/should Netherlands be redlinked? I see there are other European teams with one so perhaps we could link Netherlands national semi-professional football team, up to you. For Finland, you linked Finland national football team later in the same paragraph so perhaps we can link the main article too.
- ✓ Done – for consistency, I have removed the link to Finland C and left both teams unlinked. SBFCEdit (talk) 18:51, 14 June 2026 (UTC)
Personal life
[edit]Following his retirement, he served as an ambassador for the Cardiomyopathy Association, raising awareness on the condition in the United Kingdom and the United States - When did he retire exactly? He announced it on February 2011 but then came back. I think adding the date of when he fully retired and/or started the ambassador role would be great.
- ✓ Done. Clarified to "retirement from professional football in February 2011" for accuracy. SBFCEdit (talk) 18:51, 14 June 2026 (UTC)
"Personal life" section - If I may, I suggest we have this section after the Death section because a lot of the things mentioned here have mentions of things in his honor or after he died, so chronologically this fits better after the Death section since readers may not have gotten there yet.
- ✓ Done. SBFCEdit (talk) 18:51, 14 June 2026 (UTC)
Death
[edit]Cole died on 30 November 2012, aged 27,[2][58] while playing football with family and friends - Do we know where? If supported by a ref, we can update it here and in the infobox.
- ✓ Done. SBFCEdit (talk) 18:51, 14 June 2026 (UTC)
Tributes
[edit]Tributes were widely paid to Cole following his death.[58][76][77][78][79][80] - This is an instance of WP:CITEKILL. Please merge or consider condensing.
- ✓ Done. SBFCEdit (talk) 18:51, 14 June 2026 (UTC)
Clubs and supporters paid tribute with moments of silence, black armbands, and applause in the minute corresponding to his squad number,[83][84][85][86][87][88][89] - Ditto
- ✓ Done. SBFCEdit (talk) 18:51, 14 June 2026 (UTC)
Honours
[edit]runner-up: 2009–10[100] - Would be great if the runner-up info is updated in the section above too!
- ✓ Cole did not feature in the final so not much to add to the prose. SBFCEdit (talk) 18:51, 14 June 2026 (UTC)
Lead
[edit]making six appearances before retiring from professional football in February 2011 due to his heart condition - I would suggest you change to "semi-retiring" since he had brief spells later, and then closing it out with his last playing date if you have a ref.
- ✓ Done. He retired from professional football in February 2011 as stated in the lead, but I have changed the wording so that it does not imply he ended all football activity at that point. SBFCEdit (talk) 18:51, 14 June 2026 (UTC)
Sources
[edit]Ref#12 - Harling, Nicholas (23 May 2005). "Cooke's pain as Grays claim second prize". The Daily Telegraph. Telegraph Media Group Holdings Limited. Archived from the original on 1 July 2011. Retrieved 14 August 2009. - It requires signing up to access the info so please update the URL access level to "Registration".
- ✓ Done. SBFCEdit (talk) 18:51, 14 June 2026 (UTC)
He featured three more times for the club that season before his run in the first team was curtailed by injury. - None of the sources say he was injured. I saw he was substituted in a game, but do we have the info to show he was injured?
- ✓ Done. SBFCEdit (talk) 18:51, 14 June 2026 (UTC)
He made his debut as a substitute in a 1–1 draw at Gravesend & Northfleet two days later - Source doesn't mention the debut, just that he joined the game. How did you make this conclusion?
- ✓ Done. Included Soccerbase reference that shows it was his debut. SBFCEdit (talk) 18:51, 14 June 2026 (UTC)
Ref#57 "Arlesey Town 3–3 Weymouth". Arlesey Town F.C. 7 January 2012. Retrieved 27 January 2012. {{cite news}}: Empty citation (help): CS1 maint: deprecated archival service (link) - I got an error notice for this ref because there is an Archive.today link which is depreciated across Wikipedia now, see Wikipedia:archive.today guidance. Unfortunately the link is not available through Archive.org so it seems we may have lost this one. I was able to verify the info with the depreciated archive, but we need to remove it. Do you have a live source we can replace with this one? Otherwise I would advise you remove it entirely (but make sure you can find another source for him joining the club), or just remove the URL, cite it as Cite new, and remove the URL since it's dead.
- ✓ Done. I have removed the reference, the Aylesbury United reference already supports it. SBFCEdit (talk) 18:51, 14 June 2026 (UTC)
"Cole leaves Top Field". Hitchin Town F.C. 17 November 2011. Retrieved 21 November 2011. {{cite news}}: Empty citation (help): CS1 maint: deprecated archival service (link) - Unfortunately the same situation here.
- ✓ Done. Removed, changed specific date to month, which is supported by Aylesbury United. SBFCEdit (talk) 18:51, 14 June 2026 (UTC)
Ref#82 ""Fairclough's Cole tribute". The Football Association. 2 December 2012. Retrieved 8 December 2012." - Ref is dead and so is the archive. Please consider removing/replacing but make sure the info in the article is also cited.
- ✓ Done. SBFCEdit (talk) 18:51, 14 June 2026 (UTC)
Former England C manager Paul Fairclough highlighted Cole's talent, humour, and approachability. - Now this is unsourced now based on the dead link. The other Ref#70 is from 2007 and has nothing to do with his death.
- ✓ Done. Unfortunately have had to remove altogether as cannot find another source for this one. SBFCEdit (talk) 18:51, 14 June 2026 (UTC)
- Apologies for the delay in responding, Morogris; I have only just seen the notifications on my talk page. Thank you for taking the time to review the article so thoroughly. Just a heads up that I have noted your comments and will begin working through the suggested changes this evening. I will let you know once they have been addressed. Cheers! SBFCEdit (talk) 16:27, 14 June 2026 (UTC)
- Thanks again for the detailed review. I have worked through all the suggested changes above. Please let me know if there's anything else! SBFCEdit (talk) 18:51, 14 June 2026 (UTC)
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