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Latest comment: 4 years ago by DarkGlow in topic GA Review

GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Missy Booth/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 17:19, 2 August 2021 (UTC)Reply

  • "In order to" → "To" (less wordy)
 DoneDarkGlow23:22, 3 August 2021 (UTC)Reply
  • "Unsure on what to do" → "Unsure of what to do"
 DoneDarkGlow23:22, 3 August 2021 (UTC)Reply
  • "street wise" should be written as one word.
 DoneDarkGlow23:22, 3 August 2021 (UTC)Reply
  • "the ways in which" → "how" (less wordy)
 DoneDarkGlow23:22, 3 August 2021 (UTC)Reply
Some Dude From North Carolina All  DoneDarkGlow23:22, 3 August 2021 (UTC)Reply
GA review
(see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar):
    b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):
    b (citations to reliable sources):
    c (OR):
    d (copyvio and plagiarism):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):
    b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
    b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

Overall:
Pass/Fail:

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