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The last paragraph of this article is libellous and incorrect as are the two references and hvae been changed as follows: There are 2 reference which have been removed. The content of the first URL has changed and now references the CV of someone else - the new incumbent of the position that Max Price vacated in 2018. So it is not possible to provide a reference or citation for an incorrect out of date citation. I have however, added a new citation to a URL/Pdf on the institution's (University of Cape Town's) website that gives the correct CV.

The second reference claimed to be a support for a position stated in the last paragraph of the article that Max Price has withheld information about admissions, maintaining white dominance and white interests. If you follow the link, the news article says no such thing. I have deleted this paragraph because it is libellous and I am raising it with the Wikipedia authorities to have it removed from the history as well. I have written a fuller article to supplement the current stub but since I am associated with the subject of the article, to avoid conflict of interest I wish to submit it in the proper way to external editors and not post it myself. CritthinkCT (talk) 11:45, 12 April 2019 (UTC)Reply

Substantial expansion of stub - requesting edit

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CritthinkCT (talk) 00:59, 18 April 2019 (UTC)Reply

Reply 17-APR-2019

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  Edit request declined  

  • Your edit request was declined because the text is insufficiently paraphrased from the source material. The majority of the copied text comes from these two sources:
  1. The Southern African Regional Universities Association website biographical page on Price
  2. Price's CV
  • Text which is to be added to an article must be written using an editor's own words and phrasing. Furthermore, the purpose of Wikipedia is not to act as a mirror for information found in the subject's resume, per WP:NOTCV. More information on the closely paraphrased materials requirement may be found here.

Regards,  Spintendo  01:17, 18 April 2019 (UTC)Reply

Following up Spintendo's Decline of Edit request

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Thank you @Spintendo for the feedback. I would like to suggest that you comment on a few paragraphs at a time to say whether these meet the criteria. Paragraphs to be added:


He was a Rhodes Scholar, a recipient of one of the Four Outstanding Young South Africans Awards (1992), a Takemi Fellow in International Health at the Harvard School of Public Health (1994–5) and elected an Honorary Fellow ad eundum of the Colleges of Medicine of South Africa in Public Health Medicine (2004).[1]

  • Political activism

In his student days at Wits he was politically active against apartheid as president of the Student Representative Council and member of the executive of the National Union of South African Students.[2][3] In the 1980s and 1990s his activism continued through the anti-apartheid National Medical And Dental Association[4] of which he was an executive member.[5]  Preceding unsigned comment added by CritthinkCT (talkcontribs) 14:34, 18 April 2019 (UTC)Reply

References

  1. "Citation for Fellowship ad eundum". Transaction of the Colleges of Medicine of South Africa Vol 49 (1). p. 10. Retrieved 12 April 2019.
  2. Dugmore, Heather (July 2012). "Impatience for change: The 1976 to 1981 era of activism at Wits". Wits Review. 21: 26–35. Retrieved 12 April 2019.
  3. "From education to activism Max Price leaves a remarkable legacy". SAJR. 2 August 2018. Retrieved 1 February 2019.
  4. "South African History Archives, NAMDA". Retrieved 12 April 2019.
  5. "South Africa History Archives 1993 Health Policy Conference" (PDF).

Requested feedback 18-APR-2019

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ISSUES WITH THE FIRST PARAGRAPH

  • References used
    • The paragraph contains many different claims, but they are all referenced to one source: the subject himself. These need to be given separate citations from the awarding organizations, per WP:INTEGRITY

Note the examples below:

ISSUES WITH THE SECOND PARAGRAPH

  • With regards to the SAJR source
    • SAJR states "Our first duty is to report accurately. We will take care to evaluate information provided to us and to cross-check it as much as possible before publishing. We will show readers and users the chain of evidence we have." With respect to claims that Wits' student days were "politically active", these have not been offered along with the appurtenant chain of evidence for these claims.
  • With regards to the National Medical and Dental Association document
    • As the claim involves "activism", which is a broad term, the specificness of this document nor its independence from the subject matter cannot be assertained.
  • With regards to the NPPHCN/SAHSSO Policy Conference 1992 document
    • The information published there which is provided for verification of the claims of activism in the edit request proposal were provided by the subject himself, as the chairperson of the steering committee. That he was an executive member of this committe may be mentioned and referenced by this document. That he was "politically active" or that his "activism continued" should ideally be provided by a source other than the subject himself. As As I stated earlier, the subject himself ought not to be the source for a majority of the information provided in an article, per WP:BLPSELFPUB.

Regards,  Spintendo  00:40, 19 April 2019 (UTC)Reply

Wiki Education assignment: AFST 107-01 Social Media and the African World

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This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 19 August 2025 and 15 December 2025. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): SXM07 (article contribs).

— Assignment last updated by SXM07 (talk) 13:54, 14 October 2025 (UTC)Reply