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Latest comment: 29 days ago by Zxm92 in topic Promotional tone and undue detail

Birth date

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The recently added source (Politico) only verifies Hiltzik's birth day and month but not his birth year. Any reliable sources that can verify the year? —Eustress talk 16:34, 11 June 2012 (UTC)Reply

I will look into, but in case that there is not. Will this suffice? [[GD23 (talk) 16:51, 11 June 2012 (UTC)]]Reply
It suffices for the birth day and month but obviously not for the year (which is really the most importance part). —Eustress talk 19:56, 11 June 2012 (UTC)Reply
Understood, just not sure if there is a source that has them all. However, most sources indicate the age of Hiltzik, which then can be combined with the source of date and month to know the year as well.(AEAA (talk) 20:13, 11 June 2012 (UTC))Reply
That makes sense. After looking at multiple sources, it is clear that they contain the age of Hiltzik. That going along with the article from Politico should be sufficient. (GD23 (talk) 14:45, 12 June 2012 (UTC))Reply

Hiltzik Strategies

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How many people are employed by this firm? When was it founded? What type of business entity is it? —Eustress talk 20:12, 25 June 2012 (UTC)Reply

promotionalism

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I have removed a considerable amount of promotionalism from the article. The details of what he did for his various customers are shown in the references--I kept essentially all of them, though I removed a long quotation not primarily about him from one. It now reads like an encyclopedia article, not a promotional web page. I think I did enough to prevent a second AfD DGG ( talk ) 23:36, 8 February 2013 (UTC)Reply

I believe this article now has a more neutral tone. BK450 (talk) 00:43, 7 December 2013 (UTC)Reply

Cleanup

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I've removed the self-promotion from this steaming pile. 71.212.60.44 (talk) 19:27, 6 February 2014 (UTC)Reply

Semi-protected edit request on 16 February 2026

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Add: Hiltzik personally represented disgraced financier Jeffery Epstein in relation to the media surrounding the initial Justice Department inquiry made in 2019[1] regarding a federally brokered plea deal in 2008 regarding a federal sexual abuse investigation [2]. Communications between Hiltzik and Epstein were revealed in declassified documents made available through the Epstein Files Transparency Act.[3] Grass toucher (talk) 04:51, 16 February 2026 (UTC)Reply

 Not done: This would need coverage from secondary sources (see WP:BLPPRIMARY), and the emails between Hiltzik and Epstein don't fully support your proposed wording. They show Epstein seeking advice from Hiltzik, but don't confirm that Hiltzik actually engaged in any PR or media relations work on his behalf. Day Creature (talk) 15:52, 16 February 2026 (UTC)Reply
Here is a secondary source.
An invoice in the Justice Department tranche shows that Hiltzik Strategies charged Epstein $25,000 for the month of June 2017. Hiltzik, who appears to have been introduced via the writer Michael Wolff, produced a memo suggesting approaches to help recalibrate his client’s image. It included questioning the integrity of attorneys who’d brought claims against him and leveraging what Hiltzik termed “third party validators” to speak out on Epstein’s behalf. The listed potential proxies included a group of then-respected names — Larry Summers, Bill Gates, Noam Chomsky, Bill Richardson, Kathy Ruemmler — who’ve since been tarnished by their association with Epstein.….
Hiltzik tells THR that he never worked on managing the publication of any story about Epstein, and says he broke off ties with the financier after Epstein spurned his advice to take public accountability. He also asserts his firm donated all its Epstein-related earnings to charity after the relationship ended, but declined to specify which. ~2026-22560-68 (talk) 00:55, 12 April 2026 (UTC)Reply
 Not done: the page's protection level has changed since this request was placed. You should now be able to edit the page yourself. If you still seem to be unable to, please reopen the request with further details. Day Creature (talk) 04:41, 12 April 2026 (UTC)Reply

Promotional tone and undue detail

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This article has picked up a good deal of promotional wording and fine-grained detail that pulls against a neutral encyclopedic tone (WP:PROMO, MOS:PUFFERY, WP:UNDUE). I'd like to work through a cleanup, and I'd like to lay out the direction here first for anyone who also wants to work on this.

Some representative examples:

The subject's reputation in crisis communications is established four separate times, each anchored to a different industry ranking — Sports Business Journal (2017), Business Insider (2021), The Observer (2024), and The New York Times (2025) — with the same short list of clients repeated across them. One sourced sentence covers this, with each client named once at the point where it's relevant.

Several peacock phrases: "the award-winning Paper Clips" (with no award named), "played a primary role in rehabilitating the actor's image," "known for his work helping to build the public image of high profile women," and "the first public relations professional to be named to the board."

"The firm is known for the high number of former employees who have subsequently become notable ... and its low-rates of employee turnover" is unsourced editorializing.

Some biographical passages run long for their significance, including the elementary school, a granular account of a brief 2000 campaign role, and a 2020 note about the theme of a student film competition.

My aim is a tighter, neutral version that keeps the well-sourced facts about his career and trims the framing and trivia around them. I'll jump in periodically and welcome discussion on any of the finer points. Zxm92 (talk) 05:23, 3 July 2026 (UTC)Reply