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Latest comment: 3 years ago by Secondtimesthecharm in topic Asking for additional editor help and suggestions

Asking for additional editor help and suggestions

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Hello - the content in Onstage and Style sections of this article seems to be promotional and non-neutral. However, I'm a brand new editor so I'm hesitant to delete these sections in their entirety. Do any more experienced editors have suggestions or tips on how to improve these sections? Thank you! Secondtimesthecharm (talk) 17:45, 6 July 2022 (UTC)SecondtimesthecharmReply

Hello Secondtimesthecharm, I'm reasonably experienced in ballet articles. I agree that these two sections should be removed entirely. Having a section about a dancer's performance style isn't a bad thing, but it's not a must. I think that there are also other promotional contents in the other sections that should be cut. Feel free to do so.
Also, when you start a new section in an article talk page, please add a heading. I put what you wrote in the edit summary here. I hope that expresses the intention of your message well. Corachow (talk) 19:40, 6 July 2022 (UTC)Reply
Hi @Corachow, I apologize for my very delayed response, but wanted to circle back and thank you for your help here and feedback on including a heading. All makes sense. Much appreciated! Secondtimesthecharm (talk) 15:45, 24 March 2023 (UTC)Reply