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Latest comment: 9 years ago by 93.212.237.92 in topic POV sentence

Sources?

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No sources throughout the whole article, except for their own websites and the film. And one website telling a lot of wonderful stories. While I am perfectly willing to believe that what this woman is doing is in fact wonderful, that's only my own insignificant POV, and all these wonderful stories are not really useful in sourcing encyclopedic content.
I had to remove one link just now because it led to a spam page, and one of those film links seems to be broken too.
Isn't there any reliable information around to support the article's claims? --93.212.237.92 (talk) 17:17, 23 October 2016 (UTC)Reply

POV sentence

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I have taken the liberty of deleting part of a sentence which was really POV, unencyclopedical, and completely unsourced. In fact, it sounded a bit like the caricature of a TV evangelist (The last of the three external links reads like that too.):

The sentence formerly read: "Since the program's start in 1993, hundreds of children have graduated and turned their lives around under her tenure."

I am not quite satisfied with the current wording though, making it sound like they graduated from school under her tenure. If someone can come up with something that's clearer and not POV, please feel free to do so. --93.212.237.92 (talk) 20:47, 23 October 2016 (UTC)Reply