Talk:Magical Chase/GA1

GA review

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Nominator: KGRAMR (talk · contribs) 00:31, 7 September 2025 (UTC)

Reviewer: TarkusAB (talk · contribs) 21:07, 8 September 2025 (UTC)

Might take me a few days to get to this, but I will. TarkusAB^talk/contrib 21:07, 8 September 2025 (UTC)

• made it difficult to distinguish which was which. Since you use the word "witch" in the same sentence, this can sound confusing. Maybe say :distinguish elements on the screen"

 Done -- Roberth Martinez (talk) 22:37, 12 September 2025 (UTC)

• When you mention that Turbo Technologies was relaunching the TG16 in North America, maybe just expand that a tad? Relaunching systems almost never happens, so maybe just explain very briefly why the relaunch.

 Done -- Roberth Martinez (talk) 23:05, 12 September 2025 (UTC)

• elf-stars This is the only place in the article you use this term. Are you talking about Topsy and Turvy? maybe just say stars, or call them by their name, since that's how you previously described them.

 Done -- Roberth Martinez (talk) 22:37, 12 September 2025 (UTC)

TarkusAB^talk/contrib 22:05, 12 September 2025 (UTC)

@TarkusAB:First pass done! I'll be on stand by to any other aspect needed to be tackled. Roberth Martinez (talk) 23:07, 12 September 2025 (UTC)

Great. I have no issues passing this to GA. It's a well-written article. TarkusAB^talk/contrib 23:21, 12 September 2025 (UTC)

@TarkusAB:I didn't expect Magical Chase to be approved that quickly but thanks for taking the time to review the article! Roberth Martinez (talk) 23:28, 12 September 2025 (UTC)