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Latest comment: 4 months ago by TheNuggeteer in topic Peer review

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I've listed this article for peer review because... This is the first article I've created with a substantial amount of prose, and I want to make sure I'm on the right track as I work to create and improve more articles for skiers. I'd appreciate feedback on the clarity and flow of the writing, level of detail included, level of technical language, what to include in the lede, and organization/structure (which seems to be fairly standard for ski racer articles). Any other comments or suggestions would be welcome as well, as I feel like there is a lot that I don't know that I don't know about creating quality articles. Thanks, Wburrow (talk) 17:28, 25 February 2026 (UTC)Reply

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This is a nice article! I will review this. 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗 (My "blotter") 00:54, 30 March 2026 (UTC)Reply

  • WP:LEADCITE: Avoid citations on the lead if they are already referenced in the body.
  • "who competes in all disciplines" I believe you need to specify what you mean by this.
  • Is there nothing about when and where she was born?
  • "The Austrian Ski Association named Egger their "Rookie of the Year" after her initial 2017–18 season." What happened in the season?
  • "and winning" -> "and her win of"
  • "earning her first-ever World Cup points" you need to specify why is it hard to get/important
  • Instead of parentheses, I suggest using {{efn}} and {{notelist}}
  • "starts that season however, with most of the season" -> "starts that season. However, most of the season was"
  • "racing on" -> "racing in"
  • "in the super-G but skied off" what do you mean by "skied off"?
  • "where Egger topped the field." I believe this is technical language
  • "going in to the" -> "going into the"

Overall, this article is good, but there are some issues and things you need to implement in future articles. I also suggest you watch your prose as there are some slip-ups and other stuff. 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗 (My "blotter") 00:54, 30 March 2026 (UTC)Reply