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Latest comment: 4 years ago by Mallo in topic GA Review

GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Light Force/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: DasallmächtigeJ (talk · contribs) 10:10, 14 February 2020 (UTC)Reply


I'm going to tackle this over the weekend, seems managable.--DasallmächtigeJ (talk) 10:10, 14 February 2020 (UTC)Reply


1. Is it well-written?

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Some minor stuff I came up with...

Lede

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Gameplay

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Development

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2. Is it verifiable with no original research?

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Yes, as it is usual with these articles, mostly old magazines but a great effort was made to make them available online.

Actually, this article states that there are five levels in Light Force, but having just played through it myself I can confirm that there are only four levels (Asteroid Belt, Jungle Planet, Orbiting Platforms, and Ice Planet), before the game cycles the levels again. This probably stems from the Crash magazine review (issue 34, page 16) incorrectly stating that there are "five sections". I believe that Crash actually got this wrong and printed an error, and that this factual inaccuracy has transferred to this article. So stating that old magazines are a reliable source of factual information isn't correct. And I say this as an ex-magazine editor of a magazine of some repute. Details printed in magazines are not always correct. Mallo (talk) 16:29, 1 March 2022 (UTC)Reply

3. Is it broad in its coverage?

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The article is very short. I am aware that with these games, information is scarce, but the questions I raised thoughout the review could help enlarge the article.

4. Is it neutral?

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Yes.

5. Is it stable?

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Yes.

6. Is it illustrated?

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Yes.

Conclusion

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Overall, a well-researched, yet short article. Should pass though, if the points above are adressed.--DasallmächtigeJ (talk) 14:24, 14 February 2020 (UTC)Reply

Passed.--DasallmächtigeJ (talk) 10:21, 16 February 2020 (UTC)Reply