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Latest comment: 10 years ago by JimmyBlackwing in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: PresN (talk · contribs) 19:29, 6 October 2015 (UTC)Reply


Starting to review this. --PresN 19:29, 6 October 2015 (UTC)Reply

And... unsurprisingly I don't have much, seeing as you're one of the best article writers in the VG project. There were couple instances where you had the period inside of a not-a-full-sentence quote, which I fixed. You're missing accessdates on your online sources, though that seems to have been intentional, and the two IGN sources could use an archive. As far as GA goes, you're golden- great job building an article on an 80s video game! --PresN 19:57, 6 October 2015 (UTC)Reply

Thanks a ton for the review! (Not to mention the flattering comments.) I'll archive those IGN sources soon. JimmyBlackwing (talk) 20:15, 6 October 2015 (UTC)Reply