Talk:Kyra (Charmed)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 02:04, 22 June 2016 (UTC)

Will review. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 02:04, 22 June 2016 (UTC)

Thank you! Aoba47 (talk) 02:23, 22 June 2016 (UTC)

General

• No copyvio detected
• No dablinks detected
• External links are fine

Development

• Expand WB

• Done Aoba47 (talk) 04:17, 22 June 2016 (UTC)

• every women on Charmed "woman"

• Done. That was a very silly mistake lol Aoba47 (talk) 04:17, 22 June 2016 (UTC)

• Wikilink Charmed: Season 10 at first mention, it is linked later

• Done Aoba47 (talk) 04:17, 22 June 2016 (UTC)

Appearances

• A few words about "the Elders" and "the Avatars"? That would save readers a click

• Done, but let me know if more needs to be added.

• The "#" may be confusing

• Clarified and done. Aoba47 (talk) 04:17, 22 June 2016 (UTC)

Reception

• I would say Kyra when I begin the section

• Done Aoba47 (talk) 04:17, 22 June 2016 (UTC)

• What exactly is Hypable?

• Done Aoba47 (talk) 04:17, 22 June 2016 (UTC)

@Sainsf: Thank you for picking up all three of my articles for review. I have addressed your above comments; please let me know if there is anything else I can improve. Aoba47 (talk) 04:22, 22 June 2016 (UTC)

Thanks for your hard work! Promoted. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 04:30, 22 June 2016 (UTC)

• @Sainsf: Thank you for your reviews! You helped me a lot to improve the article and catch all of my silly mistakes. Aoba47 (talk) 04:34, 22 June 2016 (UTC)