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Latest comment: 2 years ago by Ganesha811 in topic Neutrality and encyclopedic tone

Neutrality and encyclopedic tone

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Hello to Purogato and any others interested. Wikipedia requires that articles be written from a neutral point-of-view, and in an encyclopedic tone. Articles should not sound like resumes, or be promotional. This is particularly important when editing an article about a living person, particularly one who is still working in their chosen field. Using terms like "award-winning", "renown", "legendary proportions", etc is certainly discouraged; colorful phrases like "fledgling and flamboyant", "most sophisticated", "bastion of smart and stylish writing" could potentially work, but only if well-backed up by multiple independent, secondary sources; I can't see support for phrases like that in the given source. The article before my and Megb64's edits came across as very flattering of Rachlis. He may or may not deserve flattery, but even if he does, that's not Wikipedia's place. If you have specific concerns, please share them and I'm happy to discuss. —Ganesha811 (talk) 02:03, 6 November 2023 (UTC)Reply