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Latest comment: 9 years ago by Sitush in topic Copyedit
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Copyedit
[edit]I have attempted a copyedit of this article. The problems were numerous and doubtless some still exist, along with pretty poor sourcing. Please note, for example, WP:EUPHEMISM (use died, not passed away), WP:MOSDATE ("20 December 2016" is the appropriate style), and avoid editorialising with emotives such as "unfortunately." - Sitush (talk) 21:45, 29 December 2016 (UTC)