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Latest comment: 3 years ago by Valereee in topic promotional tone

promotional tone

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Hey, @Plandu, what do you see as promotional tone? Valereee (talk) 16:36, 26 June 2023 (UTC)Reply

The number laudatory quotes and the focus on details (like the large carrots) seems non-encyclopedic or at least undue weight. Perhaps I should have gone with a POV template or undue weight template rather than a promo template. Plandu (talk) 17:45, 26 June 2023 (UTC)Reply
I basically looked for everything I could find and didn't find anything negative except the disappointment over the carrot steak, and the large carrots are simply a fact: they're needed to do the dish. Could you suggest anything? I hate to leave a tag that to me looks like it's not something I can even figure out the problem. Valereee (talk) 17:48, 26 June 2023 (UTC)Reply