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Latest comment: 2 years ago by MatthewDalhousie in topic Sources

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Hi @Remsense,

Thanks for the attention you gave this article. After I saw the tag, I spent some time giving it a purge. Mostly removing profile-journalism-like language, and sourcing better citations, usually from specialist online journals. A few parts of the article just had to go because there really was not reliable source at all. If you can point out anything in particular I might have missed, please let me know.

MatthewDalhousie (talk) 02:33, 21 May 2024 (UTC)Reply

Thanks for your feedback here @Remsense. Having improved the citations, and removed the peacock language, I think the article is in a place where we can remove the flag? MatthewDalhousie (talk) 00:16, 22 May 2024 (UTC)Reply
As per above discussion, as needed changes have been made, will remove tags. MatthewDalhousie (talk) 00:44, 31 May 2024 (UTC)Reply

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Hi @Jamiebuba noticed you made this change - can you tell me what you mean "source verification failed"? Cheers. MatthewDalhousie (talk) 07:49, 23 June 2024 (UTC)Reply

Have tried to start a discussion, and achieve a consensus with you and other interested editors here @Jamiebuba. Puzzled that you've not taken that invitation. MatthewDalhousie (talk) 01:09, 24 June 2024 (UTC)Reply
Source materials have been revised as per this advice. Grateful for the suggestions and the prompt that improved the article overall. MatthewDalhousie (talk) 04:38, 11 July 2024 (UTC)Reply