Talk:Joe Secord

GA Review

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Nominator: BeanieFan11 (talk · contribs) 03:09, 13 February 2025 (UTC)

Reviewer: Gonzo fan2007 (talk · contribs) 15:01, 13 February 2025 (UTC)

I'll take this one. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 15:01, 13 February 2025 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable, as shown by a source spot-check. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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Comments

• I would add a sentence to the end of the lead about his post football career.
• company rebranding as the Pioneer Distributing and Pioneer Liquid Company in 1946 --> "rebranded"
• He lived nearly his entire life in Green Bay and he died there on August 21, 1970, after a short illness delete the second "he"
• References are consistently formatted and appropriate for what is being cited
• Ref 10 needs an access-date
• Spot checks: #3, #4, #5, #7 and #10 all check out.

Nice work BeanieFan11. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 16:51, 14 February 2025 (UTC)

• @Gonzo fan2007: I think I addressed everything. BeanieFan11 (talk) 17:48, 14 February 2025 (UTC)
  • Passed. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 18:19, 14 February 2025 (UTC)

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