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This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Linneyern92. Peer reviewers: Morocoolguy, Tcha23.

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This page has very balanced paragraph. Everything about the author is neutral and does not have personal opinion. Awards and Filmography sections are filled with detailed information, which is excellent. Also you have great independent sources. Each paragraph does not have grammatical errors and all the sentences are very simple and easy to read. Although there are some points you can improve. You can make a graph for the Awards and Filmography sections. And link more information such as York University. But overall this page is good. --Tcha23 (talk) 05:38, 29 February 2016 (UTC) Tcha23 (talkcontribs) 05:04, 29 February 2016 (UTC)Reply

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This article is very well balanced with no grammatical mistakes and anyone who reads it could easily understand its contents. good work on referring to her work in chronological order, shows that you have planned writing her achievements in an organized manner. solid resources and solid work on keeping her career information actually related to her career life and not drifting off to other topics. You could improve however by grouping the awards and nominations that she has earned in the same year, instead of mentioning each award separately to avoid repetition. All in all good work. Morocoolguy (talk) 02:01, 1 March 2016 (UTC)Reply