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GA review
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Nominator: Chiswick Chap (talk · contribs) 15:10, 2 May 2026 (UTC)
Reviewer: ThadeusOfNazereth (talk · contribs) 19:13, 3 October 2026 (UTC)
- Review to come, will be placed below. ThadeusOfNazereth(he/him)Talk to Me! 19:13, 3 October 2026 (UTC)
- Many thanks! Chiswick Chap (talk) 20:24, 3 October 2026 (UTC)
- GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
- It is reasonably well written.
- a (prose, spelling, grammar, and understandability):
b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, lists, and tables):
- No blocking issues after I updated the categories and a few mislinks. This is a well-written article!
- a (prose, spelling, grammar, and understandability):
- It is factually accurate and verifiable, as shown by a source spot-check.
- a (reference section):
b (inline citations to reliable sources):
c (OR):
d (copyvio and plagiarism):
- Can the Carpenter citation be refined to an actual page or page range instead of the "111, 200, 266 and throughout"?
- The Carpenter ref is to three pages (not unusual); since Tolkien's Middle-earth writings took up much of his working life, Carpenter's book alludes to them frequently throughout, as indicated.
- Also, the two publication history citations seem to be citing the wrong book (how is a 2001 book supporting a claim about a 2005 book?).
- Just a date glitch, fixed.
- Can the Carpenter citation be refined to an actual page or page range instead of the "111, 200, 266 and throughout"?
- a (reference section):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects):
b (focused):
- The coverage is generally quite good but the synopsis section is lopsided towards the first and third parts of the book, with the second part getting only a single sentence without any additional commentary. Are you able to equalize this, or is it just not as in-depth as the other two parts?
- The first part is four chapters, the second one chapter, the third two chapters, so the summary reflects that.
- Also, is there a specific reason why Stegan and Caldecott are described as "Christian" and "Catholic" respectively?
- Caldecott is well-known as a specifically Catholic scholar. Stegan is an Evangelical Christian; we can add "Evangelical" to his gloss if you like but I don't really think it necessary.
- The coverage is generally quite good but the synopsis section is lopsided towards the first and third parts of the book, with the second part getting only a single sentence without any additional commentary. Are you able to equalize this, or is it just not as in-depth as the other two parts?
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:

- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:

- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
b (appropriate use with suitable captions and alt text): 
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- This article is well-done, with only a few small notes and fixes before I believe it'll be ready to pass! ThadeusOfNazereth(he/him)Talk to Me! 19:38, 3 October 2026 (UTC)
- Pass/Fail: