Talk:How Democracies Die
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three possible edits under "Synopsis", "Recommendations of the authors", "Reception"
[edit]Here are three proposed edits. Making a determination on the second will require access to the source cited.
In the first paragraph under "Synopsis", final sentence, change second use of "opinions" to "views" (to avoid needless repetition)?
Under "Recommendations of the authors", in the quotation marked [1], is "crisis" possibly in fact "crises" in the original?
Under "Reception", first paragraph, at "David Runciman in The Guardian called it provocative but puts too much emphasis ...", would the intended meaning be better conveyed by inserting "wrote that it" between "but" and "puts"? Jorjulio (talk) 03:41, 15 July 2024 (UTC)
Second paragraph, first sentence, under "Synopsis"
[edit]"The authors cite the various branches of government in a system with separation of powers have actions available to them that could completely undermine the other branches or the opposition." The sense/grammatical integrity is not evident to this reader. Add "the fact that" right after "cite"? Jorjulio (talk) 10:35, 26 December 2024 (UTC)