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Latest comment: 1 month ago by Celia Homeford in topic execution sitr
Former featured articleHenry VIII is a former featured article. Please see the links under Article milestones below for its original nomination page (for older articles, check the nomination archive) and why it was removed.
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February 18, 2025Good article reassessmentDelisted
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Result: Delisted. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 21:01, 18 February 2025 (UTC)Reply

There is uncited prose in the article, particularily in the "Succession" and "Style and arms" sections. I think redundant and off-topic text has crept into the article, and I think a copyedit would be useful to tighten up the prose and remove excess text. Particularly, I think the "Execution of Anne Boleyn" section focuses too much on Boleyn and much of this text can be moved to her article, with the section placing more emphasis on Henry's actions. Z1720 (talk) 23:11, 26 December 2024 (UTC)Reply

I think I'll be able to fix the uncited issues. Can you identify the other text you think should be trimmed or removed? --Chronicler Frank (talk) 21:41, 9 January 2025 (UTC)Reply
@Chronicler Frank: I think a subject matter expert can go through the article and remove extra detail from the article, or try to state ideas more succinctly. Here's some specific places that I think can be trimmed or cut:
  • "Wives, mistresses, and children: What is the purpose of this blockquote? I think it can be removed as unencyclopedic and too focused on his personality, instead of what the section is about.
  • "Government": Lots of talk about Cromwell and Wolsey, perhaps this would be better in a spun out article about Henry's government.
  • The block quote in "Historiography": why does a person writing in the 1950s get a whole paragraph, instead of having their research summarised in the article?
While I would do this myself, often my ideas of where to trim are met with complaints that I cut too many important details. If others are interested, I am happy to do this work. Z1720 (talk) 23:39, 9 January 2025 (UTC)Reply
I'm quite inclined to agree on spinning out some government stuff (into what would surely be a quite interesting article in its own right) and using a more concise summary style. Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 05:49, 11 January 2025 (UTC)Reply

@Chronicler Frank: Are you still interested in working on this article? Z1720 (talk) 13:58, 20 January 2025 (UTC)Reply

@Z1720: Yes, I am still looking for citations. Chronicler Frank (talk) 08:43, 22 January 2025 (UTC)Reply
@Chronicler Frank any updates? All Tomorrows No Yesterdays (Ughhh.... What did I do wrong this time?) 13:13, 14 February 2025 (UTC)Reply
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

What would it take to get this article back to GA/FA?

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After having read the whole article, I must admit; it's one of the most innovative articles out there. But the prose doesn't flow as smoothly as it should, overcomplicates or fails to summarize some events, and can sometimes be too long. If we fix these problems, and maybe rewrite the entire lead, I feel like this article actually has a great chance at being promoted. What do you all think? I'll do my part, of course, by rewriting the lead. Hopefully I can keep it 4 or 5 paragraphs long. UltraCobson (talk) 13:44, 22 June 2026 (UTC)Reply

execution sitr

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.Anne was not executed on Tower Green, but in a location near the current entry to the crown jewels. ~2026-37166-55 (talk) 07:04, 29 June 2026 (UTC)Reply

It's not where the memorial is but was on what was Tower Green. The building containing the crown jewels wasn't there in the 1500s. Celia Homeford (talk) 14:18, 29 June 2026 (UTC)Reply