Talk:HD 154672
Add topicLatest comment: 14 years ago by Wizardman in topic GA Review
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GA Review
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Reviewer: Wizardman (talk • contribs • count) 18:26, 4 September 2011 (UTC)
Here are the issues I found:
- "It is about 65 parsecs away from the Sun that is larger, but of a similar mass, as the Sun; it is, however, much older." and is larger; confusing as worded now.
- "Originally, HD 154672 was flagged as home to such a short-orbit "Hot Jupiter,"" the 'such a' part throws the sentence off, not positive what it's trying to say.
- "HD 143672, however, is far" rm however here, was getting a bit overused.
Article will be put on hold and passed when fixed. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 18:26, 4 September 2011 (UTC)
- I've addressed everything you've mentioned. Thanks for taking on the review. :) --Starstriker7(Talk) 22:26, 4 September 2011 (UTC)
- No problem. Article looks good now, so passed. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 01:55, 5 September 2011 (UTC)
- I've addressed everything you've mentioned. Thanks for taking on the review. :) --Starstriker7(Talk) 22:26, 4 September 2011 (UTC)