Talk:Gray Stenborg

GA Review

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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 20:43, 3 July 2021 (UTC)

• "He shot down a Focke Wulf 190 fighter near St. Omer on 26 April, commencing a run where he shot down four aircraft in five days. He destroyed another Fw 190 the next day and on 29 April he shot down two more" - I'm a bit confused here. He shot down one on 26 April, one on 27 April, and two on 29 April. That's four in four days, not four in 5 days. Am I misinterpreting something?

• It is actually five days, I got the last date wrong. I have rephrased. Zawed (talk) 08:24, 5 July 2021 (UTC)

• "He was eventually able to bale out" - just checking to make sure that "bale" is the correct spelling for NZ English; in America it would be spelled "bail" in this context

• I confirm that bale/baled/baling out is correct NZ/British English. Zawed (talk) 08:24, 5 July 2021 (UTC)

• Sources and image licensing look fine.

Once the one bit about four in four days or five days gets worked out, this one will be good to pass. Hog Farm _Talk 04:48, 4 July 2021 (UTC)

Hog Farm, thanks for taking a gander at this one. I have responded as above. Cheers, Zawed (talk) 08:24, 5 July 2021 (UTC)

Gray father did not come from denmark he came from Sweden

Grey father did not come from denmark he came from Sweden (Gothenburg). He left Sweden 1909 joined the merchant fleet 16 years old he escaped from home. He was a sailor and worked in various places around the world until he came to New Zealand where he met Rudi Moore.

Gunnar came back to Sweden in the 1970s.He brought with him Grey logbooks from 91sqn and we have copies of it. The original is with the family in Gothenburg

Grey is my mother's cousin. We only have pictures and logbooks left of Grey. It's good that there's a wiki page on Grey now.

--Recordings72 (talk) 12:28, 11 August 2021 (UTC)