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Latest comment: 10 years ago by Sunnya343 in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sunnya343 (talk · contribs) 00:58, 5 June 2016 (UTC)Reply


Hello I will be reviewing this article. Seems short overall but broad in its coverage. I will go through and make some minor grammatical corrections. - Sunnya343 (talk) 00:58, 5 June 2016 (UTC)Reply

Lead and infobox

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Good, looks like you used the CAPA profile as a reference. - Sunnya343 (talk) 16:52, 5 June 2016 (UTC)Reply

History

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  • I realise GoAir was launched in 2005 but perhaps this section could be expanded. Information about why the airline was launched, first flights, important new destinations, major expansions, major announcements etc. I see some interesting articles here. But I like the info about GoAir's strategy.check
Excellent - Sunnya343 (talk) 16:52, 5 June 2016 (UTC)Reply

Corporate affairs and livery

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  • Examples of the colours used perhaps?check
Good - Sunnya343 (talk) 16:52, 5 June 2016 (UTC)Reply
  • "new grey colour scheme for the new aircraft" - Specify. Does this mean all new aircraft will get the gray scheme? And what new aircraft?check
Good - Sunnya343 (talk) 16:52, 5 June 2016 (UTC)Reply

Destinations

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  • I see this article talks about their interest in launching international destinations.check
Good - Sunnya343 (talk) 16:52, 5 June 2016 (UTC)Reply

Fleet and new orders

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  • "GoAir received its first A320neo on 1 June 2016." - No refcheck
Good - Sunnya343 (talk) 16:52, 5 June 2016 (UTC)Reply

Awards

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  • Perhaps some elaboration on the awards and their significance. For example, what does "Best performing airline" mean?check
Good - Sunnya343 (talk) 16:52, 5 June 2016 (UTC)Reply

References

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  • Ref 17 has issues.check
Good - Sunnya343 (talk) 16:52, 5 June 2016 (UTC)Reply
  • This is minor, but I notice in the "publisher" section of the refs you write "Go Air" rather than "GoAir".check
Good - Sunnya343 (talk) 16:52, 5 June 2016 (UTC)Reply
  • References for information in the article that is unlikely to change (e.g. the history section) could be archived, so you don't have to worry about their going dead in the future. (Might be, but dead urls are often flagged by bots and corrections can be done if necessary.Magentic Manifestations (talk) 14:37, 5 June 2016 (UTC))Reply
Ok - Sunnya343 (talk) 16:52, 5 June 2016 (UTC)Reply

Other

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  • More information about their frequent flyer programme?check
You say the programme was discontinued (also need a ref for that), so shouldn't it be removed from the infobox? Also make the info about the programme past tense. - Sunnya343 (talk) 16:52, 5 June 2016 (UTC)Reply
Gave a thought to it. It seems like the programme does not exist any more as the website does not work and nothing is listed on Go Air website. A source says new membership was discontinued in 2014. So, have removed it from infobox as well.Magentic Manifestations (talk) 18:09, 5 June 2016 (UTC)Reply
Ok, I will pass the article now. Thanks for your efforts improving the Indian airline articles - Sunnya343 (talk) 23:19, 5 June 2016 (UTC)Reply

Once that is done I will be able to pass the article. - Sunnya343 (talk) 16:52, 5 June 2016 (UTC)Reply